MY SOONISH MYSTERY SERIES ✦ EPISODE 01 OF 07

THE THIRTEENTH PASSENGER

The Passenger Without a Ticket
There were twelve passengers when the train departed.
Thirteen when it arrived.
Blackthorn Station at midnight

The last train left Blackthorn Station at exactly 11:40 p.m.

There was nothing unusual about its departure.

The platform clock struck eleven forty. The stationmaster raised his green lantern. A whistle sounded somewhere beyond the fog, and the seven carriages began to move.

Inside the third carriage, conductor Daniel Mercer checked his passenger list for the final time.

Twelve passengers.

He had counted them twice.

There was an elderly woman knitting a blue scarf, a businessman who had fallen asleep before the train even moved, a young couple whispering over a shared newspaper, and eight others whose faces Daniel would forget by morning.

It was an ordinary journey.

At least, it should have been.

11:58 P.M. — The Empty Seat

The mysterious passenger in Seat 13

Daniel was halfway through the carriage when he noticed something strange.

Seat 13 was occupied.

He stopped.

The man sitting there was perhaps fifty years old. He wore a dark wool coat, polished black shoes, and leather gloves. A cup of tea rested on the small table beside him.

Daniel knew the seat had been empty.

He had placed his own newspaper there before departure.

Now the newspaper was gone.

"Ticket, please," Daniel said.

The stranger looked up.

His face was unremarkable. Brown eyes. A narrow mouth. A small scar beneath his left ear.

Yet something about him made Daniel uncomfortable.

"I'm afraid I don't have one," the man replied.

"Then how did you board?"

The stranger stirred his tea.

"You saw me."

"No, sir. I checked every passenger."

"Did you?"

Daniel opened his list.

Twelve names.

He counted the people in the carriage.

Thirteen.

"There's been a mistake," he said.

The stranger smiled faintly.

"Yes. There has."

12:07 A.M. — The First Disappearance

Daniel went to fetch the senior conductor.

When he returned, the stranger was still sitting in Seat 13.

"That's him," Daniel said.

Senior conductor Harris looked down the aisle.

"Who?"

"The man without a ticket."

Harris frowned.

"Mercer, there's nobody in that seat."

Daniel turned.

The seat was empty.

The cup of tea was gone.

So were the gloves.

Only the newspaper remained, folded neatly on the cushion.

Daniel picked it up.

It was his newspaper.

Except someone had circled a small advertisement on the final page.

LOST PROPERTY
ALL ITEMS MUST BE CLAIMED BEFORE ARRIVAL.

Daniel had never seen that advertisement before.

He looked at Harris.

"How many passengers are aboard?"

"Twelve."

"Are you certain?"

Harris sighed and began counting.

One. Two. Three.

He continued down the aisle.

When he reached the final row, he stopped.

"Eleven," he said.

Daniel felt the train sway beneath his feet.

"What?"

"Eleven passengers. You must have counted incorrectly."

But Daniel remembered the businessman who had been sleeping in Seat 8.

He remembered the grey suit.

The silver watch.

The small brown suitcase beneath his feet.

Seat 8 was now empty.

The suitcase was gone.

And when Daniel asked the elderly woman whether she had seen the businessman, she stared at him in confusion.

"What businessman?"

12:19 A.M. — The Woman Who Remembered

Clara looking through a rainy train window

Daniel retreated to the vestibule.

He needed to think.

He unfolded the passenger list.

There were twelve names.

But the eighth name had vanished.

Not crossed out.

Not erased.

The paper was perfectly clean, as though nothing had ever been written there.

"You're looking for the man in the grey suit."

Daniel turned.

A young woman stood in the doorway.

She had short dark hair and carried a small black notebook.

"You remember him?" Daniel whispered.

"Of course."

"What's your name?"

"Clara Vale. Seat 6."

Daniel checked his list.

Clara Vale.

Seat 6.

She was there.

"How do you remember him when nobody else does?"

Clara glanced toward the carriage.

"Because I've been writing everything down."

She opened her notebook.

On the first page were twelve names.

Beneath them, written in smaller letters, was a thirteenth.

UNKNOWN MAN — SEAT 13.

Daniel stared at the page.

"When did you write that?"

"Before we left the station."

"That's impossible."

"I know."

She turned the page.

There was a drawing of the stranger.

The scar beneath his ear.

The leather gloves.

The cup of tea.

Daniel's mouth went dry.

"Why did you draw him?"

Clara hesitated.

"Because he told me I would need to remember his face."

12:31 A.M. — The Wrong Count

Dark corridor inside the train

The train entered a tunnel.

Every light in the carriage flickered.

Once.

Twice.

Then darkness.

For three seconds, Daniel heard nothing but the wheels striking the rails.

When the lights returned, the elderly woman had stopped knitting.

Her blue scarf lay across the empty seat beside her.

She was staring at Daniel.

"Young man," she said, "how many of us are there?"

Daniel looked at Clara.

"Don't answer," she whispered.

The elderly woman's expression changed.

"Please. I need to know."

Daniel counted.

Eleven passengers.

Then ten.

He counted again.

Ten.

A cold sensation spread through his chest.

The young couple were no longer sitting together.

Only the woman remained.

She was still holding the newspaper.

But she had moved to the center of the seat, as though she had been sitting alone all evening.

"Where's your husband?" Daniel asked.

She looked up.

"My what?"

Daniel stepped backward.

Clara seized his arm.

"Stop asking them questions."

"Why?"

"Because every time you make them remember someone who's gone, another person disappears."

Daniel stared at her.

"How do you know that?"

Clara's eyes filled with tears.

"Because I've already made that mistake."

12:44 A.M. — The Passenger List

They locked themselves inside the conductor's compartment.

Clara spread her notebook across the desk.

"Listen carefully," she said. "I boarded this train at Blackthorn. I counted twelve passengers, just like you."

"Then you saw the stranger?"

"Yes."

"What did he say?"

Clara swallowed.

"He asked me whether I knew where this train was going."

"And?"

"I told him Westbridge."

Daniel nodded.

That was the final destination.

Clara shook her head.

"He said Westbridge wasn't on the timetable anymore."

Daniel reached for the official schedule.

Blackthorn.

Millfield.

East Hollow.

Westbridge.

Four stations.

Nothing unusual.

Then he noticed something.

There was a fifth station printed beneath Westbridge.

The letters were faint, almost invisible.

He held the paper closer to the lamp.

RETURN.
Arrival time: 1:13 a.m.

Daniel had worked this route for fourteen years.

There had never been a station called Return.

From the other side of the locked door came three soft knocks.

A man's voice spoke.

"Mr. Mercer?"

Daniel froze.

It was the stranger.

"You have something that belongs to me."

Clara closed her notebook.

"Don't open it."

The stranger knocked again.

"Mr. Mercer, please. We're running out of passengers."

Daniel looked down at his list.

Only nine names remained.

Then eight.

Then seven.

The ink was disappearing while he watched.

"What's happening?" he whispered.

Clara's face had gone pale.

"He's counting us."

12:57 A.M. — The Thirteenth Name

The mysterious passenger list

The knocking stopped.

For several seconds, neither of them moved.

Then Clara spoke.

"There's something I haven't told you."

Daniel looked at her.

"What?"

"When I boarded the train, the stranger gave me this notebook."

She pushed it toward him.

"He said I should write down everyone I saw."

Daniel opened it.

Twelve names.

The stranger's description.

The vanished businessman.

The young couple.

Everything Clara had recorded.

But beneath the final name was a sentence Daniel hadn't noticed before.

Written in red ink.

One of them must remember.

He turned the page.

Another sentence.

One of them must remain.

Then he reached the final page.

There was a list of thirteen names.

Twelve had been crossed out.

Only one remained.

DANIEL MERCER.

Daniel stared at it.

"Why is my name here?"

Clara didn't answer.

"Clara?"

She was looking at the door.

Slowly, she stepped away from him.

"Because," she whispered, "you weren't on the train when it left."

Daniel felt the blood drain from his face.

"That's ridiculous. I'm the conductor."

Clara shook her head.

"No, Daniel."

She pointed to the brass nameplate on his uniform.

He looked down.

The nameplate was blank.

Outside, the train began to slow.

A voice crackled through the overhead speaker.

It was Daniel's voice.

But Daniel wasn't speaking.

"Good evening, passengers. We apologize for the delay."

The speaker hissed.

"We have located the missing passenger."

A pause.

Then the voice continued.

"Mr. Daniel Mercer,
please return to Seat 13."

The empty Seat 13
END OF EPISODE 01

TO BE CONTINUED...

He thought he was counting the passengers.
But someone had been counting him.

NEXT EPISODE

The Man in Seat 13

Tomorrow, Daniel will discover why the train has no driver — and why every passenger is carrying the same ticket.

COMING TOMORROW ✦